The story idea is very intriguing. Unfortunately, the choppy writing and serious lack of proofreading/editing makes it a very frustrating read. Several times I was tempted to give up but kept going just to see how the myth-building panned out. Then the main female character, Maggie, left a lot to be desired. This is supposed to be a girl smart enough to skip a grade to graduate a whole year early. However, from her thoughts and reasoning, she came off rather ditzy a lot of the time. Could not bring myself to like her.